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sampler
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Date Registered: 11.2001
Location: Leganes, Spain
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Well, if u have and want to say something about this song this is the place. 
If you haven't felt it when i was composing this song i thought i was flying in the air, clean and pure air, merged with nature.
I've used some VSTis and two SF2s. The cello one is modified by me to make high notes sound not so artificial.
As always, if anyone is interested in the .psy i'll send it. 
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sampler
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Date Registered: 11.2001
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Yes, before any1 say it, i'd like to make some little changes.
For example, add at the beggining some city noises as alk has suggested and this way the introduction would be a bit longer cos i think it's a bit short.
The cross delay for snare is boring/repetitive as alk said yesterday.
A little correction for compression level problems. I've already used some trick (on the piano at the beggining) but should use more at the final (lowering the volume), when piano, bass and cello sound alone.
Finally maybe i try to change this cello SF2 if i found another better.
The master ogg is a bit distorted too.
......but anyways, it's not that bad now, isn't it?
thnx Jim 
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Last edited by sampler on 12.04.2005, 12:53 o'clock.
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MfM
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Date Registered: 08.2003
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SAMPLER-floatando en el aire
MY REVIEW
Nice birds fx on the intro with a melodic piano that make a great ambient atmosphere.
Very good drums line ,I liked the snare panning delay but maybe you should decrease the volume …seems to be too high than the whole song.
Fantastic bass sound fixed in a good way in to this tune,I liked it so much.
The song structure is very good as your usual,and there are a lot of instruments inside this one.
The cello makes a pretty variations to the song,but I think it needs others melodies changes especially for the piano.
The overall sound is quite good but not so crystalline,I think could be fixed with some equalizing….especially for the pad and piano to makes them more present on the song image.
The last thing ….i think it lacks some break..for example to introduce the new instrument(could be the cello .. ).
Maybe I have been so critic .. …but hey I liked it it’s a great song with a good structure and good technique,for my point of view it needs something for become a great one!!
Cheers
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Last edited by MfM on 12.04.2005, 13:24 o'clock.
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sampler
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Date Registered: 11.2001
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Thanks a lot MfM. I LOVE this kind of reviews, totally constructive.
The best thing is that again i think you have the reason in all you've said. I don't know why but seems that i have to wait someone to say the faults to fix them though i 'internally' know that they are bad. 
I'll try to make a new version with all your critics/ideas/suggestions....
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alk
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Date Registered: 12.2001
Location: Edinburgh
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>The best thing is that again i think you have the reason in
>all you've said. I don't know why but seems that i have to
>wait someone to say the faults to fix them though i
>'internally' know that they are bad.
I'm the same
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Taika-Kim
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Date Registered: 03.2002
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quote: Original by sampler
The best thing is that again i think you have the reason in all you've said. I don't know why but seems that i have to wait someone to say the faults to fix them though i 'internally' know that they are bad. 
Haven't listened to the tune yet, but:
Often it's like that, but many times people won't even notice things you've been fretting over about for hours... Also sometimes people just like different things than you. So there might be parts I have doubts about in some of my songs but I've left there because somebody said they are nice.
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sampler
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Date Registered: 11.2001
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I finished last week the definitive version of the song.
The final title is Flotando en el aire suavemente
http://psycle.free.fr/sampler/sampler-Fl..._suavemente.mp3
I'm really happy with this one. I hope you enjoy it. 
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