A derivate i made from an old track of mine.....

http://kerubainternational.reverbnation.com/

Greets to all Psyclers.

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I like the ravish feel and the anarchic mood. I think it could improve a little in the bass area, but it already sounds good as-is. The freq sweeps are cool.

The outro is great and it could be used in a proper "break" section in the middle of the track. And maybe repeat the initial vocal with some dub-like FX...

I'm talking too much. The track is already good for sure!

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Thanks ofr the constructive critic,

it was a bit hard for me because the track was initially a technotrack i made about 2 years ago but i was never satisfied with the final version.

So, i thought i recycle it add some Broken Beats and see where it will go.

You´re definatly right it could improve a little in the arrangement but i was a bit limited in this because i only had the final rendered .wav files left and so i fiddeld around, add some Effects, vocals and the new beat (which was a little weird because i added to the Kick some Distortion and it lost a bit its punchiness) i thought it has not to be perfect, i`m not a Tausendsassa (as we say here in Austria)

Finally you tell me about the bass, that is always a problem for me, i`m mixing and mastering for about a year now and everytime i made the same mistake, to much bass. So, the last few tracks i made i tend to cut down the bass at about 100Hz so i don`t fall in the same hole again and again, i guess i need more practicing but i don`t like all the technical audio thing that much so i will see in the future........where my journey goes.

Cheers

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