Hi everyone,

I've been working on this track for a couple of weeks now (in between other things), and I'm at the stage where I need some critical feedback.

I'm seriously considering sending this one off to a few labels once I've got all the EQing and levels sorted. At the moment though, I'm still working on the percussion (still a bit dud at the moment) and thinking critically about the intro and outro - do you think it's too similar to the main section of the track?

At the moment, the track's a little bit too simple, and I'm working on adding some interesting air fx etc as well.

Any constructive criticism and comments would be greatly appreciated!

You can find it here (10MB mp3)

Thanks in advance!

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